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Death Whispered a Lullaby by ~djmors17:icondjmors17:



Death whispered a lullaby
As I passed by today
Not a scream, not a song
It just whispered away

Saying,
“Love the ones you’re with
complacency is just a burden,
not a gift
so love the one you need
cuz there’s no tomorrow
for thee”

The feelings were
Soft and true
Too late to start again
It was through

No time left to
Say goodbye
But time has no meaning
So why

Must you love the one’s you’re with
When there is nothing left
To give
Why must I love the one, I know
When there is so much more out there
Why should I feel alone?

:Refrain:

Death whispered
In my ear
It said “Say goodbye to the morning,
And the air
Bittersweet thoughts of
Suicide
When the one you love most
Is the one that’s gonna die

Saying,
“Love the ones you’re with
complacency is just a burden,
not a gift
so love the one you need
cuz there’s no tomorrow
for thee”
©2006-2008 ~djmors17
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A piece inspired by the work of Lullacrie... [link]

Turned into more than I expected with the few minutes I put into it...

She had a piece entitled "Death Whispered a Lullaby"
I asked, "What did Death say?"
She responded, "You tell me."

So I did.
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*kickmeiamadog:iconkickmeiamadog: Feb 7, 2006, 7:53:05 AM
I can't imagine Death saying Cuz... lol... maybe 'Cause or because... ;)

Besides that silly complaint, i can complain no more!!!

I really enjoyed it, i really liked the refrain sections, they were cool :)

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Well all i can say is if my heart was quiet i would feel empty, the fact it still beats out a sadness means i still have a heart to care. - Me 24/05/04

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~djmors17:icondjmors17: Feb 7, 2006, 7:56:18 AM
Damn... Good point... Oh well. I shoulda thought about that.

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"No rain can wash away my tears
No wind can soothe my pain
You made me doubt, you made me fear
But now I'm not the same"
-Wolfsheim
*kickmeiamadog:iconkickmeiamadog: Feb 7, 2006, 8:38:53 AM
Ah well, was damned good anyways, i'm sure death might make contractions for rhythm!

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Well all i can say is if my heart was quiet i would feel empty, the fact it still beats out a sadness means i still have a heart to care. - Me 24/05/04

I am an adopter at :iconwriters:
~quave:iconquave: Feb 7, 2006, 9:31:09 AM
This is awesome, now I want to write again... damn you.

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Floydians.
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~vworrell:iconvworrell: Feb 7, 2006, 10:04:24 AM
Wow D... you spoke to me with this one. :hug:

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The Power Be Thy Storm That Holds My Heart.- ME
~djmors17:icondjmors17: Feb 7, 2006, 10:55:41 AM
Thanks for the fave, dear... *smile*

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"No rain can wash away my tears
No wind can soothe my pain
You made me doubt, you made me fear
But now I'm not the same"
-Wolfsheim
~horns-and-halos:iconhorns-and-halos: Feb 7, 2006, 11:07:49 AM
Nice Piece djmors.

my favorite line has to be:

“Say goodbye to the morning,
And the air
Bittersweet thoughts of
Suicide


I like the topic too, very inspiring.
~djmors17:icondjmors17: Feb 7, 2006, 12:08:57 PM
Thanks!

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"No rain can wash away my tears
No wind can soothe my pain
You made me doubt, you made me fear
But now I'm not the same"
-Wolfsheim
~Nee-Chee:iconNee-Chee: Feb 7, 2006, 1:27:36 PM
Lovely.. Well, with that knowledge, I know how to live life, now. :P

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"Capture ze BEER, Hans!" :beer:
~djmors17:icondjmors17: Feb 7, 2006, 1:43:01 PM
Was that sarcasm?

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"No rain can wash away my tears
No wind can soothe my pain
You made me doubt, you made me fear
But now I'm not the same"
-Wolfsheim